twilight

the sky glows orange tonight
luminous in its artifice
hundreds of street lights reflect back
from the storm clouds
gathering

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3 thoughts on “twilight

  1. “luminous in its artifice”
    I can see this perfectly, like a photograph. And am also considering this line and the next in terms of your previous post. The artifice in how we present ourselves, what we allow others to see in us (their reflection?).

    • Ooooh! I like that you made that connection. I often think of that, so though I wasn’t consciously linking them, there is definitely a consistency in my thinking. Thank you for your careful reading and analysis – and for as always bring a kindred spirit.

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